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Some believe that the best way to stay fit is to join a gym or health club while others think doing everyday activities such as walking and climbing stairs is enough. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Being healthy is very important for every human being in the world so, all prefer various measures to be fit. Some people argue that joining the fitness
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
 would be correct, while other people argue that rather than
gymming
obtain
gaining
gaming
, involve in daily
action
Suggestion
activities
such
 as walking running can make very strong.
However
, I do think that following
gym
 session is productive. On the one hand, a growing number of people argue that heavy physical activities will help to keep our self sustain because the
gym
 is the only place to make our self-fit, it has professionally trained coaches to help to train in the proper way,
moreover
, we will work out there in a
dedicative
relating to logical deduction
deductive
 manner without feeling any laziness.
Additionally
, it leads to follow the diet with nutritional food
On the other hand
, a few sections of people think that
this
 is
effect
Suggestion
effected
effecting
effectively
 less. In prior times our ancestors were healthier than nowadays. Those days they did not do any exercises.
Therefore people
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Therefore, people
 believe join in the
gym
 is full of
money waste
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money, waste
 and time waste, it can be
possible being fit
Suggestion
a possible fit
possible fit
possible fitted
 through our daily activities.
For example
, door to door salesmen have to do a lot of walking.
Likewise
, some jobs involve the lifting of weights. People who engage in
such
 jobs are unlikely to have to do anything extra to achieve fitness. In conclusion, even though
gym
 training, everyday activities are acceptable to take care of our self, but it is
vary
Suggestion
varied
 from every person's choice, In my point of view I would suggest fitness clubs are more effective.

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