government should put tax on unhealthy food to motivate people to eat Healthy food.do you agree or disagree?

nowadays
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Nowadays
,
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,
the demand of junk f is increasing day by day as compared to Healthy
food
. It is a school of thought that high
tax
should be set on fatty
food
by authority in order to encourage people to eat good
food
.I strongly agree with the statement in
this
essay I will discuss my point of view
perior
earlier in time
prior
to reaching a valuable conclusion.
To begin
with
,
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,
fast
food
is hazardous
for
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to
health
,
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,
with imposing extra charges on healthy
food
,
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,
sale
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the sale
will diminish and masses would not have another option to choose or buy healthy
food
as the repercussion the statistics of diseases
such
as obesity, cardiovascular diseases, diabetes and cancer would
also
decrease.
For example
,
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,
Maxico's
salespf
prepacked
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Prepacked
food
have fallen in a year after introducing an 8 percent
tax
on these foods compared with
increase
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the increase
an increase
increases
in
untaxed
food
. Apart from
this
,
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,
companies
also
Produced healthier products when
government
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the government
lonched
set up or found
launched
a
tax
on unhealthier products.
Moreover having
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Moreover, having
a
tax
on convenience
food
also
trickle down to potentially free up billions in
health
care spending
.
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.
Taxes
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The taxes
on these
type
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types
of foods
such
as sugary drinks, candies, fried
food
, hamburgers and pizza
also
helpful to accumulate money
,
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,
which authority can use to mop - up
this
problem by advertising its
deterimental
(sometimes followed by 'to') causing harm or injury
detrimental
effects and restriction on its production.
For instance
, in the past five years, almost 13countries have announced new taxes on these products just to address the enormous and growing burden on their
health
system. To conclude, it is a fruitful idea to start
tax
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taxing
on that type of
food
which is not Healthy, as it helps to improve many people's
health
and
also
create a
good
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better
health
care system.
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