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Things like puzzles, board games and pictures can contribute to a child’s development. What would you give a child to help him/her develop and why? Give details and examples in your explanation.

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Items like puzzles,
board
 games and pictures undoubtedly holds a significant contribution to the child's growth. I strongly believe that these items are the inevitable factor for the kid's development who ranges between anyone from the time of birth to until the age of
teenager
Suggestion
the teenager
a teenager
.
Firstly
, Puzzles as it sounds like a riddle is a most easy to do
task but
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task, but
 only once you become used to it. Children should be encouraged to play puzzle games because, they will see a lot of different pieces of the puzzle scattered on
table
Suggestion
the table
a table
, they would send signals to brain to recognize and identify the objects they know and separate them from different objects. After
this
, kids brain and hands work in tandem, which actually helps them to find the right piece and fit it into the puzzle accurately.
For example
, it has been observed that children who were exposed to puzzles
first
 time were filled with anxiety and fear and looks astonished as compared to the others who play it on a regular basis.
Second
, important item is
board
-games which are very common and quite popular among kids but not all forms of it. The children should try to play most of the varieties of the
board
 game because it
helps especially
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helps, especially
the young
Suggestion
younger
the younger
 kids to recollect the
numbers
Suggestion
amount
 of dice, they can easily locate the safe and unsafe spots on
board
 games and on top of that they are aware of some dangers like a snake bite in
board
 games.
Thirdly
, pictures often help the children to store the images in the mind so that they can be recollected at the time when shown to them either to identify the name of the people or the place they went to. To conclude, the items like puzzles,
board
 games and pictures, all three of them are vital in the overall child development, and if ignored, it can bring detrimental effects to the children overall growth and development

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