The environmental problems that today's world is facing are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. So government and large organizations should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. The what extent so you agreed or disagree?

Environment
Suggestion
Environmental
issues are very alarming to all developed and developing countries. Few ordinary people can do small things to help improve the
nature
.
However
, many people believe that
government including
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government, including
the large companies should take massive actions to reduce the damage to the
environment
, while other commenters, disagree. The writer, strongly agree with the latter view, and the reasons will discuss
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Suggestion
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by a conclusion. To start with,
environment
Suggestion
the environment
is taught to be a safe place for the living creatures, but due to many factors that leads to unhealthy and filthy surroundings.
Nature
is in danger because of air and water pollutions, plastics and any other things that could destroy the surrounding. Thereby, the
government
and the massive organizations, should be responsible in limiting the amount of damage to the
environment
, it is because of the detrimental effect to the people. They are powerful and have the resources to implement
such
things that help to protect the mother earth. One measure, that should implement is to encourage people to utilize public transportation to reduce the pollution that can cause diseases too like pneumonia, heart disease and hypertension too.
For instance
, in America people started to use buses
instead
of private cars to help the
government
to save the mother earth.
As a result
, it is efficient and effective.
Furthermore
, massive companies should
also
encouraged to reduce the plastic bags and to stop other companies that expelling negative smoke to the
nature
, that could damage the ozone layer. People nowadays, is aware that plastic cannot dissolve easily and it takes a hundred years, and the negative effects of bad smoke of the
nature
that could lead to climate change. For, instance, in Malaysia all citizens are using biodegradable items.
Hence
, lead them to a safe and
nature
friendly
environment
. To sum up, I believe that the
government
and with the collaboration of larger organizations, is responsible for taking care and limiting the negative effect to the
environment
.
Thus
, some measures should be strictly, implemented to achieve a certain goal. The goal is to have a safe and clean
environment
.
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