The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The first pie chart illustrates the

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of

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use whilst the

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pie chart demonstrates the

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greenhouse

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gas

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emissions

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by the respective activities in an average

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household.

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,

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the

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is mainly spent on heating, the

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the largest

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of

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is, in fact, water heating.

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, if an

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consumes much

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, it is not necessarily that

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emits a large amount of

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. Despite the fact that nearly

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half of the total

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(around 42%) is spent on heating, only 15% of total

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gas

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are constituted by

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activity

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.

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energy

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use and

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gas

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emissions

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are approximately the same for the water heating

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(30% and 32%, respectively) and the cooling

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(2% and 3%, respectively).

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, in other activities, the proportions of the total

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gas

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they emit are twice as large as the

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of the total

energy

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spent on them,

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as

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refrigeration (14% and 7%, respectively), lighting (8% and 4%, respectively) and other appliances (28% and 15%, respectively).