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The pie chart below shows where energy is used in a typical Australian household, and the table shows the amount of electricity used according to the number of occupants.

The pie chart below shows where energy is used in a typical Australian household, and the table shows the amount of electricity used according to the number of occupants.
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The pie chart depicts the rate of an average Australian house’s
power
 usage in the form of
percentage
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percentages
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 by various appliances, and the table illustrates data regarding electricity consumption (
kWh
 per year)
according to
 the number of people in a household.
Overall
, the pie chart reveals that maximum
power
 is consumed by Heating and cooling,
while
 the minimum by Stand-by
power
. The table shows that generally as the amount of people living in a house increases, the
per person
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per-person
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 share of
power
 usage goes on decreasing.
Firstly
, in the pie chart, the highest electricity usage is taken by Heating and cooling, water heating, and other appliances (clothes and dishwashers, entertainment and small gadgets like a toaster, hairdryer and iron) accounting for just under 40%, one-quarter, and 16% respectively. Standby
power
 is the most
energy saving
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 (least
power
 consumer) with a negligible 3% share.
Secondly
, the table demonstrates that the electric unit consumption in terms of
kWh
 per year units is proportionately declining as the
quantity
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number
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 of family members
rise
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rises
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. A solo household member uses between 5000-6500
kWh
,
whereas
, a large family of 6 or more consumes only 12000-16000
kWh
, which is double
to
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apply
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that of
2-person
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a 2-person
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 household (6000-8500
kWh
).
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Vocabulary: Replace the words power, kwh with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stand" was used 2 times.
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