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Many people believe that having a fixed punishment for all crimes is more efficient. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a fixed punishment?

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The concept of punishing the wrongdoers is always debatable.Most of the people argue having
a
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 equal tenure is more effective
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while other schools of thoughts counter the previous statement.
This
 essay will provide the merits and demerits about that topic. There are many advantages to having a fixed punishment.
Firstly
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people tend to think before
commiting
perform an act, usually with a negative connotation
committing
 a simple
crime
.They would rather follow
rules
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the rules
 than opposing them for small reasons.
For example
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If a person thinks about doing petty crimes like stealing someone's wallet or picking up a fight at some regular bar
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he or she will give a
though
the content of cognition; the main thing you are thinking about
thought
 before acting out of spite or necessity with the fear of jails.
Secondly
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this
 arrangement helps to maintain the law and order.
This
 will make it easy for the government to control the
crime
 rate as well as all the criminals will be treated regardless of their
socio-economic
involving social as well as economic factors
socioeconomic
 status and the influence they had.
For example
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If a politician commits a
crime
 he will be subjected to the same hostile
enviornment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
environments
 as the common people. Unfortunately
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this
 arrangement if implemented has
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a plethora
 of drawback as well.If the same means
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tenure, then
then
people
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the people
 who commit
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of or relating to a small cursive script developed from uncial; 7th to 9th centuries
minuscule
crime
 will be at
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a loss
.
For example
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If a person gets caught in a drunk and drive
case
a motor vehicle with four wheels; usually propelled by an internal combustion engine
cars
 without causing any actual damage to the citizens or the buildings
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a fair warning and significantly big fine would suffice or a day in jail at least.But exposing him to the same treatment as a convict who was accused of murder is not fair.
Furthermore
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it gives the people wrong ideas that if even if you commit a larger
crime you
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crime, you
 will be penalised as the same like a
theif
a criminal who takes property belonging to someone else with the intention of keeping it or selling it
thief
 and
this
 makes it hard to maintain peace in the nation. I encapsulate it
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as even though there are a number of advantages to implementing
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an
 equal punishment for all crimes
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the disadvantages
takes
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take
 precedence over the former.The
implemention
the act of accomplishing some aim or executing some order
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implementing
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if based on crimes
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can provide a
more effect
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more effective
 than with the equality.The persons should be treated based on the intensity of the act they conducted and should be punished
accordingly
.
This
 helps in
maintaing
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maintaining
maintain
 the smooth operation of government and for the betterment of society.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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