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Tourism is becoming increasingly important as a source of revenue to many countries, but its disadvantages should not be overlooked. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Although
 tourism is the main source of GDP for certain countries, it
also
 has a detrimental effect which should be taken into account. I agree that its disadvantages should be considered since it may lead to spreading terrible diseases or dirtiness in some places. The main reason why I believe that tourism might be disadvantageous to certain ex
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 can re
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result in a pandemic
Indeed, if individuals from a particular country get sick, they can easily spread
this
 sickness among others by travelling to different areas.
For example
, cu
rrent coronavirus outbreak t
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a current coronavirus outbreak
the current coronavirus outbreak
aught us how quickly can pandemic get started due to the travels, and only lockdown of the whole country is the best solution to combat
this
. Another reason to support aforementioned issue is the fact that the most visited countries suffer from dirtiness from tourists who flock to these places from all around the world. To clarify, not only do tr
avelers l
a person who changes location
travellers
eave plenty of garbage after themselves, but it
also
 significantly difficult for social services to keep
such
 crowded places clean. To illustrate, Paris is one of the most popular places among tourists in the world and
also
, it has a reputation of the most romantic place, but it contains a significant amount of garbage on the streets and in subways which may spoil the whole beautiful picture of the city. In conclusion, while many countries introduce new ways to attract tr
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ill enhance their economic situation, there are some drawbacks which the authorities should
also
 bear in mind
such
 as po
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the possibility
f spreading diseases or the garbage.
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