Children do not respect their parents as much as they did in past. This behavior is now having a negative impact on society. Discuss

In
Victorian era it
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the Victorian era, it
the Victorian era it
was said that ' children should be seen not heard'. Now
pendulum
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the pendulum
has swung
to
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in
another direction. In recent search it is revealed that despite of having every
facilities
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facility
, children became disrespectful and discourteous with elders. The reason for
that is
influence
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influencing
of actor and actresses and youth's developed abilities compare to parents
.
Accept space
.
To embark upon, at
tender age
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a tender age
, kids are living in their imaginary world. They watch television and films and try to mimic that sort of action. If parents rebuke them to do that, they feel bittered and start neglecting their guardian. Not only
that but
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that, but
due to digital evaluation most of the time children spend with their mobile phones, so
this
addiction turns into
barrier
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a barrier
the barrier
between his and
parents
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parents'
parent
parent's
relationship.
Communication gap
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The communication gap
is showing its effects. For an instance, my
friends
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friend's
son to make an impression on his peers mind started smoking when my friends scolded him, he neglected her and stopped talking with her. Another reason for my
view point
a mental position from which things are viewed
viewpoint
is at an early age parents cater to every whim and fancy of their child, which is why many children start taking their parents for granted.
Moreover
, due to generation gap there is
vast difference
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a vast difference
in thinking. That leads to arguments and
tussel
disorderly fighting
tussle
among qualified experts and amateur
enthusiastic
an ardent and enthusiastic supporter of some person or activity
enthusiasts
. Young person cite that freedom is getting
harass
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harassed
or no one
is understanding
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understands
his feelings,
this
result into
arrogance behavior
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the arrogant behaviour
arrogance behaviour
arrogant behaviour
arrogant behavior
of them. After having above mentioned view and examples, it can be recapitulated as, to maintain harmony of relationship parents and child should go hand in hand, understand each other and children should not look down at their fountain head and should not act as impudent.

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