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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do so many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

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Nowadays, people do not get exercise regularly or often either during the working period or free time on account of the fact that there have health problems,
such
 as physically and mentally ill. In
this
 essay going to describe reasons why human beings have not got enough exercise and how can be fixed that problems. The
first
 point, that a lot of adults are working longer hours and more days to earn money for luxury life because of that fact they do not have much time for physical activities.
As a result
 of that human have to face a lot of health issues like the kind of illnesses.
For instance
, diabetes, cholesterol and blood pressure that all of those causes infected to persons as barely strength. On the other reason is persons have a lot of responsibilities to fulfil for their family,
such
 as, look after kids, parents and job even so those duties make persons sick and mental trouble like stress and depression.
Furthermore
, every people have to create a time-table by including day to day work and fitness, especially activities which can challenge to previous sickness.
Firstly
, adults have to join the gym regularly, which is helping to fit mussels and body shape.
Additionally
, human have to go jogging daily in the early morning, which is helping to maintain body fit and feel refreshed.
In addition
, all of those factors make the body strong and healthy to fight with disease that makes human weak and having a proper fitness will help to be a beautiful and comfortable. In conclusion, If people can spend at least one hour of their busy life, that time can spend to do some fitness activities which help to be strong and healthy.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Time constraints
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Passive leisure activities
  • Workplace wellness programs
  • Active commuting
  • Subsidized
  • Public awareness
  • Health benefits
  • Incentivizing
  • Accessible public spaces
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