The number of elderly people in the world is increasing. What do you think are the positive and negative effects of this trend?

In today’s society, cumulate development in the field of healthcare has resulted in

notable extension

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a notable extension

of human lifespan, which in turn leads to a growing number of elderly people.

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has significant impacts, both positively and negatively on the society that will be

discuss

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discussed

below. On the one hand, it is the economy and society that

benefit

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benefits

profoundly

from

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for

the increasing population of the elder.

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, the fact that more people are reaching old age leads to higher the demand for medical care, which gives way to business in the field of healthcare to thrive.

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opportunity will be lucrative not only for

hospitals but

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hospitals, but

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pharmacies, nursing homes and

healthcare

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health care

center

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centre

as a majority of people

have

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has

to rely on others to look after.

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, as the senior citizen are more exceptional and experienced, the younger generation can learn a great deal from them.

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, health practitioners who are above 50 are often more

skillful

having or showing knowledge and skill and aptitude

skilful

and have profound knowledge about their speciality. Those can work as professors at universities or hospitals and are capable of dealing with unusual diseases with alternative therapies.

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,

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instigates numerous negatives including financial burden on social welfare and generational conflict. The more people retire, the heavier the strain on old-age aid is, due to the fact that a majority of elders fail to earn an income and have to depend entirely on their families or the government.

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, the large sum of funding, pensions and medical costs will put considerable pressure on the working population, together with affecting

other expenditure

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the other expenditure

of the government.

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, it is the difference in perception and experience that can build up generational conflict between the older parents and adult children. As the elders’ outlook on life collides with the novel ways of living,

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instance on

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instance, of

instance of

child rearing or lifestyle choices, tension within the family will be created which

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stresses the adult children out. In conclusion, the constant proliferation (sự tăng

nhanh

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) in the ageing population has brought both benefits and burdens to the societies.

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, in order to tackle the problem, the government should implement aging-friendly policies and efficient programs so as to mitigate

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issue's negative

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influence

.