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Write a letter to your friend who has asked you about a short course, which you have done. Write about the content of the course. The future benefit of the course.

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Dear Somebody, Thank you for your letter. I'm fine, thank you and hope things are well with you and your family too. Sure, I'm happy to share my experience and learnings from the
data
science
course
 I took recently and the one that you are planning to pursue. The
course
 is managed by the computer
science
 department of the Middletown
university
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 and commences every winter and fall season spanning over 3 months with 2 classroom sessions of 1 hour each week conducted on the primary campus of the Middletown
university
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University
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. The
course
 is designed and
lead
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 by the professors from the computer
science
 department and IT professionals and is intended to help novices in the field of
data
science
 develop a basic understanding of the various of working with
the
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big
data
, i.e.,
data
 collection, storage and usage. The
course
 introduces students to the basics of working with the
data
 i.e., what is
data
, database, basic understanding of tools and technologies available to work with large sums of
data
, types of
data
 (linear, relational, fluid),
data
 storage, retrieval and querying. It is not technical in nature and is intended to help business managers
to
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better understand the
data
 and analytics which
drives
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the
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everyday
decision making
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. I found the
course
 quite useful and it has helped me have a more informed conversation and point of view
while
 working with the
data
 and the teams owing it and it may benefit you as well given
similar
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 nature of your role. I believe the benefits from the
course
 are worth the money, time and
efforts
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. I hope you find
this
 information useful and feel free to ask if you have
further
 questions. Wishing you all the best and happy learning!
Your
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 sincerely, Aliasgar

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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