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In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining quality of air and water from both industry and construction what measures could be taken to prevent this?

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In the period of capitalism, the most enormous movements of industrialization and development of several constructions in many developing countries have been playing a highly responsible role to harm our environment- specially evaporating air and polluting
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 initiatives that we can take to resolve
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 problem. Building a huge number of industries in most of the developing countries is a quite common scenario from the very begging of our civilization. According to
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, the amount of pollution is now a global concern.
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, choosing place near the river to develop a lot of mills is the vital reason to diminish the quality of
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, a high number of wastages every time is throwing under the river
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 as well as the emitted poisonous gas makes cities unlivable day by day. In Bangladesh, daily a ton of garbage is harming the underwater atmosphere which
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 has been making the
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 quality horribly down. The only thing government should restrict to protest
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 situation, ruling not to give any license due to build factories close to the city and obviously, not
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 the river banks as well. On the top of that, planning for a well organised way for controlling wastages which could bring harm towards the environment is the necessity. As far the better initiative would be choosing rural places long away from living to develop the industrial area may decrease the effects of emitted chemicals towards living being.
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, the of high rising various constructions like high roads, flyovers, institutions and accommodations is the another threatening issue for living in the developing cities as well. Construction are growing gigantic in some cities like we will not be able to see the sky someday.
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, the air is getting extremely tough to breath to order to dusts of developments. To protest that situation, governments should spread public awareness about the bad impacts of building an excessive number of constructions. Apart from that, throwing limitation to build constructions and applying more eco-friendly technological equipment to handle
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 condition may be an efficient way. In fact, we can grow peoples' awareness by encouraging them to use mask outside.
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, persuading the developers to do whole construction works at the night time so that, people could be less effected by the air pollution. In the end, the industrial revolution is essential for every country, but we should follow some ways to develop our city not by harming our environment.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • pollution control regulations
  • emissions
  • discharges
  • green technology incentives
  • environmentally friendly practices
  • renewable energy sources
  • sustainable materials
  • waste management policies
  • recycling processes
  • environmental monitoring
  • compliance with environmental standards
  • public awareness campaigns
  • environmental protection
  • infrastructure upgrades
  • modern building techniques
  • international environmental organizations
  • air and water quality management
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