The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying fulltime or part-time. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The graph below illustrates how many
men
and Use synonyms
women
got enrolled in Use synonyms
further
Linking Words
education
and whether it was in part-time or full-time Use synonyms
education
in Britain studied over three periods.
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Overall
, what stands out is that the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
students
studying part-time has always been much higher than the Use synonyms
Use synonyms
students
pursuing full-time Correct quantifier usage
number of students
education
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, by the Linking Words
end
of the Use synonyms
period
, more females got enrolled in Use synonyms
further
Linking Words
education
than Use synonyms
men
.
Focusing on part-time Use synonyms
education
, the figures for Use synonyms
men
pursuing it had experienced a fluctuation, Use synonyms
whereas
the numbers for Linking Words
women
had increased over the Use synonyms
period
studied. At the beginning of the Use synonyms
Use synonyms
period
Add a comma
,period
men
had the highest Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
students
enrolled with 1 million Use synonyms
students
enrolled in 1970/71. Use synonyms
However
, the figures dropped to around 8,50,000 Linking Words
students
by the Use synonyms
end
of the Use synonyms
period
. Use synonyms
In contrast
, the figure for Linking Words
women
had experienced growth with the Use synonyms
number
of registrations increasing by 2,50,000 Use synonyms
students
by the Use synonyms
end
of the Use synonyms
period
studied.
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On the other hand
, full-time Linking Words
education
was not as popular as part-time courses among Use synonyms
students
. Use synonyms
Although
only 1,00,000 Linking Words
men
and 50,000 Use synonyms
women
enrolled in it at the beginning, the figures rose by 50% and 75% respectively by the Use synonyms
end
with an equal Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
men
and Use synonyms
women
registered.Use synonyms
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