Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive.

It’s often said that government medical

service

must be provided without any payment for the citizens in spite of the fact that contemporary methods of treatments cost much. There are some countries in the world that already don’t charge for

healthcare

at all. In

this

essay I’m going to look at some advantages and disadvantages of

this

approach. I have to take into consideration that free

medicin

the branches of medical science that deal with nonsurgical techniques

medicine

medicines

medication

may cause lack of specialists, long waiting time for the patients and affect

development

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the development

sience

a particular branch of scientific knowledge

science

sciences

. When clinics or hospitals don’t bill for their

service

it always means that doctors are

payed

marked by the reception of pay

paid

by tax payers. Every general

phisician

a licensed medical practitioner

physician

physicians

position

dantist

a person qualified to practice dentistry

dentist

dentists

in the country has the same salary. It leads to the best professionals

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to go

work abroad and only

avarage

approximating the statistical norm or average or expected value

average

specialists treat their citizens.

Additionaly

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Additionally

number

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a number

the number

of doctors

reduses

cut down on; make a reduction in

reduces

so people have to make appointments and

…..

Accept space

…..

unable

Suggestion

Unable

to treat

immidiatly

without delay or hesitation; with no time intervening

immediately

Also it

Accept comma addition

Also, it

is obvious that in every sphere of life government regulation leads to stop researching and updating technologies.

Healthcare

autorities

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

authorities

regulate area in a hard way and develop very

cirtuan

definite but not specified or identified

certain

methods of cure. But there are lots of benefits free

healthcare

Suggestion

health care

provides to

sociaity

an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization

society

such

guaranted

give surety or assume responsibility

guaranteed

guarantee

treatment for everyone, equal conditions in all hospitals and jobs for many specialists.

First

of all, in

cause

an occurrence of something

case

of emergency it is no need to think about if you are able to pay for help or not.

This

reduces

stress

Suggestion

the stress

…..

Accept space

…..

makes

Suggestion

Makes

people happier.

Secondly

, all the patients receive similar treatment at every clinic. It is important for government to perform high standards of

service

all over the country.

Finally

unpaid health system

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an unpaid health system

creates many vacancies for doctors, develop local labour market and reduce unemployment.

That is

why states with free

healthcare

Suggestion

health care

usually have

more stable economy

Suggestion

a more stable economy

. Summarising all positive and negative features of free medical

service

, I conclude that it is better to provide non-paid

healthcare

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health care

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