Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discus both sides and give your opinion.

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Providing education to every child is the order of the day for their better future. Many people think

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is the most important thing to secure a good

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, while others believe that having

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and soft skills are good enough to excel in one’s career. In my opinion,

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a university degree

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is essential to secure a good

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job whereas

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soft skills and

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helps you perform your

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well. On the one hand, many of us think it is easier to for most of the people to find a good

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if they are

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graduates with a good

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is the reason why we have overwhelming competition among young adults to get an admission in good universities here in Pakistan, even people tend to pursue their tertiary education abroad. It is

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observed in many

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advertisements where it is specifically mentioned in minimum education requirement that “

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is must”.

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, there are many professions where it is impossible to work without

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, medical, law and teach to name but a few.

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, it is obvious how important is to get a good

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to secure one’s career.

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, having work

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and soft skills

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as good communication and leadership skill through the balance in favour of the applicant, but it all depends on the position being applied for.

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, if the company required a

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graduate, only soft skills will not help the contender to secure the

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. It is often noticed when there are multiple candidates are shortlisted for a single position with the same kind of

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is the soft skills or extra knowledge, which matters at the end of the day. In conclusion,

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degree

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is the most important thing to secure a

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depending on the type of work or field, but we cannot deny the importance of soft skills and

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. People should focus on both sides for not only getting the

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job but

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to sustain in the market.

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