Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discus both sides and give your opinion.

Providing education to every child is the order of the day for their better future. Many people think
university
degree
is the most important thing to secure a good
job
, while others believe that having
experience
and soft skills are good enough to excel in one’s career. In my opinion,
university
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a university degree
degree
is essential to secure a good
job whereas
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job, whereas
soft skills and
experience
helps you perform your
job
well. On the one hand, many of us think it is easier to for most of the people to find a good
job
if they are
university
graduates with a good
degree
.
This
is the reason why we have overwhelming competition among young adults to get an admission in good universities here in Pakistan, even people tend to pursue their tertiary education abroad. It is
also
observed in many
job
advertisements where it is specifically mentioned in minimum education requirement that “
University
Degree
is must”.
In addition
to
this
, there are many professions where it is impossible to work without
degree
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degree, for
for instance
, medical, law and teach to name but a few.
Therefore
, it is obvious how important is to get a good
degree
to secure one’s career.
On the other hand
,
although
, having work
experience
and soft skills
such
as good communication and leadership skill through the balance in favour of the applicant, but it all depends on the position being applied for.
For instance
, if the company required a
university
graduate, only soft skills will not help the contender to secure the
job
. It is often noticed when there are multiple candidates are shortlisted for a single position with the same kind of
degree
,
this
is the soft skills or extra knowledge, which matters at the end of the day. In conclusion,
although
degree
is the most important thing to secure a
job
depending on the type of work or field, but we cannot deny the importance of soft skills and
experience
. People should focus on both sides for not only getting the
job but
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job, but
to sustain in the market.
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