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Some people think young people are not suitable for important positions in the government，while other people think it is a good idea for young people to take on these positions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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It is believed by many, youth not well-fit to work on higher state positions, while other people have
opposite view
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opposite views
the opposite view
an opposite view
 on it. Overall,
this
 dispute possible to considering with two sides: innovation an experience. My view here that new faces should have
place
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placed
 in government,
however somebody
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however, somebody
 experienced must control them. At
first
 glance, theoretically, new politicians look
on
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at
for
 old problems, that has our system throughout
years
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the years
, differently that allowed make fresh ideas for solutions it. Young people have energetics and ambitions that in theory gives more capabilities to changes of painful issues.
Consequently
, in theory, young politicians
has
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have
 a positive impact on
politics
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political
 life.
Although
, if we look
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at
for
 a
practice
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practical
 side, so we have
after
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over
elections
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electing
 inexperienced men in handling of huge system where everything interlinking.
For instance
, in Ukraine new politicians are beginning
digitalization
the administration of digitalis for the treatment of certain heart disorders
digitalisation
 without testing capacities of computer systems that force to modernize, and to huge spending from budget these companies and tax organs. Inasmuch as they cannot predict consequences all
this
 changes even after upgrading that led to damaging of Local economic in every part with ambiguous result in future.
Secondly
,
that
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that's
 more important politic has parts where new people cannot experiment
such
 as foreign policy where one misstep led to
horrible outcome
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a horrible outcome
.
Hence
, new politicians must have somebody for controlling their
activity
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activities
. In
conclusion my
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conclusion, my
 opinion between two sides because government cannot consist only
from
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of
 elderly people
also
 from only new people too.
Therefore
 govern position should
has
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have
equal place
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an equal place
 for both of generations for
keep
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keeping
 political life balanced.
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