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Today, most people get married and give birth in their thirties rather than when they are younger.Is it a positive or negative development in your opinion? To what extent do you support this development?

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Getting married and having babies at the age of 30 sound positive in terms of financial and career path.
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 the infertility is a case of concern for women
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 is a negative development.
To begin
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Firstly
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 in the age of huge competition, everyone wants job security for a lifetime. For
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 their priority is career rather than setting up a family.
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 one can be seen believing in financially stable in their life
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 not to face any consequences after marriage because it holds lots of responsibilities
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 For these reasons, one wants job security and monetary stable
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 the reproductive health of women starts declining after 30 and chances of infertility
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 they will pay a bigger price than they bargained for. In conclusion, though the positive
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