Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.

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Over the
last
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half-century,
Advertizing
a public promotion of some product or service
advertising
is became
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is becoming
has become
becomes
more and more
popular among of
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popular among
big companies. Some people consider that
advertizing
a public promotion of some product or service
advertising
low-quality products are bad for inhabitants.
However
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, I think “if
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product
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the product
a product
is bad, who does buy it? In
this
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essay I will explore both
side
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sides
of
advertizing
a public promotion of some product or service
advertising
.
First
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of all, advertisement is pretty good for who is in the initial of
making
engage in
doing
business as well as whom business is decreased to down. Because of, in fact advertising is useful when necessity is increased to some
product
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.
For example
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, without advertising people are not able to know about what is added to the
product
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. Another plus of
advertizing
a public promotion of some product or service
advertising
is that
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product
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the product
a product
can be spread out in a short time.
Secondly
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, The big issue is that
power
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the power
of advertising is dramatically climbed of low-quality
product
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.
Subsequently
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, It
tend
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tends
to less people`s
confident
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confidence
to
advertizing
a public promotion of some product or service
advertising
.
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.
For particularly,
advertizing
a public promotion of some product or service
advertising
of bad quality
product
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`s can be influenced
on
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by
people to buy it. Gradually, Truth
of
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in
advertising is normally went down by people In
conclude
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concluding
,
power
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the power
of advertising really can affect on people, to buy not on purpose some low-quality
product
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.
Accept space
.
In order to avoid
this
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condition,
Government
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the Government
should manage all of them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer behavior
  • perceived need
  • lifestyle aspirations
  • brand image
  • prestige
  • psychological techniques
  • scarcity
  • social proof
  • celebrity endorsements
  • technological advancements
  • product innovations
  • emerging consumer needs
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