The pie charts below show the amount of electricity generated by energy source in scotland for 20 years ago and last year

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the percentage

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of electricity generated in Scotland, by energy source for two decades ago and the

last

year

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, Scotland has spent

huge

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a huge

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amount of electricity generated to increase nuclear from 20

years

ago to

last

year

on the other

hand

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gas and coal show decreased process during these

years

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, oil

hydro

natural flow,

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hydro-pumped

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hydro

pumped storage and other renewables have

showed

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different changes. 20

years

ago nuclear had

third

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a third

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place, but

last

year

nuclear's range depicted more than

quarter

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. Coal despite coal

was

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being the most popular in the past, dropped approximately

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10% from 32.7%,

however

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gas was not charged and lost only

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minimally

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percent

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per cent

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In addition

hydro pumped

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hydro-pumped

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storage and

hydro

natural flow,

for example

also

declined slightly by 1 % each of them. Oil (2.1%) with other renewables (2.8%) ,

last

year

demonstrated two times more amount , rather than 20

years

ago.

Sat Mar 21 2020

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The pie charts below show the amount of electricity generated by energy source in scotland for 20 years ago and last year

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