Fast food is universally in most countries and it is becoming increasingly popular. Some feel that it is positive trend, while others do not

Some people think that, most of people keen on from fast foods and
this
kind of products becoming increasingly popular.
However
, others believe that it is harmful.
Personally I
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Personally, I
partly agree with both of opinions and in the following paragraphs, I intend to support my opinion by stating arguments, reasons and examples. Let's start by looking at the disadvantages of junk foods.
To begin
with, it is
well known fact
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a well known fact
that, fast foods constitutes lots of harm and fat.
In other
words it's so
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words, it's so
difficult
to
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for
digestion system.
For instance
, after eating hot dogs or hamburgers our organism star
digest
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digests
. From the fact that it contains too much fat, the body does not have time to kindle everything. Eating fast food regularly leads to fullness.
Furthermore
, extra weight leads to early death. In general, too much addiction junk foods detrimental.
On the other hand
, I think that, we can find advantages too. To be more exact snack's cost not expensive and preparing faster than other meats.
Therefore
, most of people choose and prefer
this
kind of foodstuff. A perfect example for
this
can be bistro near our homes. In conclusion, delicious and cheap products always were popular across all. Taking all the above into account, it may be concluded that everything can be perfect if it is in balance
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