Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships that people make? Has this been a positive or negative development?

In

this

day and age, it is true that

technology

has a great impact on the

way

we communicate with others. From my perspective

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it has affected various kinds of relationship and I believe that

this

advancement has both positive

outweight

be heavier than

outweighed

outweighs

outweigh

the negative development. It is easy to point out that since the existence of the

technology

has alerted the

way

we talk in different relationships

such

as social life, education and business.

First

and foremost, with the numerous social media platforms

such

as Facebook, Zalo, Twitter

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etc

continuing in the same way

etc.

, we are not only making more friends around the

world but

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world, but

also

easily keeping in touch with our acquaintances and beloved ones by video chats without going

ouside

beyond the boundary of; external to

outside

to meet them.

Second

, online education is becoming a common feature so that the students are able to interact with their teachers and

friendmates

throughout some online study applications.

This

way

helps teachers and school children to save a large amount of time commuting back and

forth especially

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forth, especially

,

ones

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the ones

who are far away from home.

Finally

, internet

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emails, phones allow

bussiness

a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it

business

people to communicate with their

collegues

an associate that one works with

colleagues

and

also

have a virtual meeting that they can stay at home to work.

This

advancement of

technology

brings many benefits for us. It not only permits us to contact with people in many parts of the globe

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but it is more convenient for whom who cannot communicate easily with other people as well. Take the disabled as an example, thanks to some technological devices, they can talk and discuss their ideas to

people

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the people

surrounding them.

However

, youngsters nowadays tend to make virtual friends on the internet rather than going outside to have real ones.

Consequently

, it leads to isolation and weaken sense of community. To sum up, it is clear that

technology

has been transformed

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has been transforming

the

way

we interact with others.

Moreover

, if we don’t depend too much on it, the advantages will be greater than the detrimental effects.