Nowadays people are working from home using computers and telephones. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development.

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The working from home option is given by office very recently.
This
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concept means the
employee
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can take the company laptop
to
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at
home and work from sitting at home. The
first
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advantage of
this
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is the
employee
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will not have to spend money on bike
petrol
a detachment used for security or reconnaissance
patrol
.
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Second advantage
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The second advantage
is the
employee
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can have a peaceful
envirnoment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
while working.
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, An escape from the office pressure. Fourthly, They can spend more time with the family. The
First
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disadvantage is the family will not allow the
emplyoee
a worker who is hired to perform a job
employee
employees
to work. They will keep on
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causing distress or worry or anxiety
disturbing
distributing
the
employee
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which
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will make the
employee
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stress level very high.
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, The relationship problem will increase very high. I conclude saying that the
employee
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can take
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option only when there is
a
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an
emergency.
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