Some people think that large, impressive buildings are important for a city. Others believe that the money should be spent on improving schools and hospitals. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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such
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buildings are important for a city, but the
money
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which should be spent on improving schools and hospitals else. Nowadays all around the world need hospitals and schools,
nevertheless
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, large and impressive buildings are necessary for countries to earn
money
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. Of course, It will become more attractive than the countries which have common and t
raditional
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traditionally
buildings.
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, these buildings are very convenient to attract t
ouirsts
someone who travels for pleasure
tourists
who can help to earn
money
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.
This
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profit is useful to develop countries.
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kind of buildings h
ave
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has
their conveniences for all of t
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the things
Even, their heights are increasing year by year.
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, there are some disadvantages which can be harmful for the environment. As they will be cause to cut trees and compress atmosphere which is necessary for our life.
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, some of them are built berry quickly, so that,
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,
they are very poor q
uality but
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quality, but
the others are too low quality which is always a
ttract
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attracted
attracting
visitors who come from abroad. At present, these buildings a
re appearing
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appear
in modern countries as like; Dubai, Paris, France and e
tcetera.
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Developed countries need hospitals and schools which can help to improve our life. That's why a great deal of people think is that
money
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should be spent f
or
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in
schools and hospitals. Now, there are an amount of d
eases
an impairment of health or a condition of abnormal functioning
disease
dishes
and illiterate people in the world.
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, some government d
o not pay
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does not pay
attention to these problems. They must help to develop them. All in all, both of them a
re important our
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are important to our
are important in our
life. As large buildings attract visitors. Wealthy people can contribute t
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to building
and reconstruct to improve hospitals and schools
that is
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needed by people.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Architectural grandeur
  • Iconic edifices
  • Economic catalyst
  • Cultural landmark
  • Urban fabric
  • Sustainable development
  • Public services
  • Fiscal responsibility
  • Community well-being
  • Infrastructure investment
  • Urban planning
  • Holistic approach
  • Government stewardship
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