Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparison where relevant.

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The two maps show changes to the campus of Sunny

hills

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Hills

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University

between 1995 and today. We can see that the

university

made

any

Correct your spelling

many

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changes during

this

period including new buildings and recreation facilities. In the past, the Scott Library was in front of

the-

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the

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Founder's Building. It was relocated to the right, and

in addition

, it increased in size. The old library building now contains laboratories. In 1995 there was a car park in the top

left- hand

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left-hand

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corner of the campus,

whereas

now the main reception is there. The halls of residence were moved to the far left of the campus and a new Arts Building was built opposite them. The old sports ground, gym, and tennis courts were demolished;

however

, in their place, the

university

created a new recreation area with a pond, trees and seating areas. What is more, the

university

developed new sports facilities, including table tennis tables, a new gym, and squash courts. They

also

built two new cafes. So,

it is clear that

the

university

changed and expanded during

this

period.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Grammar mistakes
 

1 paragraphs

178 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Include an introduction and conclusion

In the modern world¬, it is no longer necessary to use animals as food or other products, such as medicines and clothing. Do you agree or disagree?

some people have the same type of job throughout their lifetime, while others prefer th change the type of job they do

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