Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparison where relevant.

The two maps show changes to the campus of Sunny
hills
a local and well-defined elevation of the land
Hills
University
between
Suggestion
Between
1995 and today. We can see that the
university
made any
changes
Suggestion
Changes
during
this
period including
Accept comma addition
period, including
new buildings and recreation
facilities
Suggestion
Facilities
. In the past, the Scott Library was in front of the- Founder's Building. It was relocated to the right, and
in addition
, it increased in size. The
old library building
Suggestion
The old library building
Old library building
now contains laboratories. In 1995 there was a car
park
a large area of land preserved in its natural state as public property
Park
in the top left- hand corner of the campus, whereas now the main
reception
Suggestion
Reception
is there. The halls of residence were moved to the
far left of
Suggestion
far left
far left on
far left on on
the
Suggestion
The
campus and a new Arts Building
was built
Suggestion
were built
opposite them. The old sports ground, gym, and tennis courts were demolished;
however
Suggestion
However
, in their place, the
university
created a new recreation area
with
Suggestion
With
a pond, trees and seating areas. What is more, the
university
developed new sports facilities, including table tennis tables, a new
gym
Suggestion
Gym
, and squash courts. They
also
built two new cafes. So, it is clear that the
university
changed and expanded during
this
Suggestion
This
period.
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