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Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparison where relevant.

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The two maps show changes to the campus of Sunny
hills
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Hills
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University
 between 1995 and today. We can see that the
university
 made
any
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many
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changes during
this
 period including new buildings and recreation facilities. In the past, the Scott Library was in front of
the-
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the
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 Founder's Building. It was relocated to the right, and
in addition
, it increased in size. The old library building now contains laboratories. In 1995 there was a car park in the top
left- hand
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 corner of the campus,
whereas
 now the main reception is there. The halls of residence were moved to the far left of the campus and a new Arts Building was built opposite them. The old sports ground, gym, and tennis courts were demolished;
however
, in their place, the
university
 created a new recreation area with a pond, trees and seating areas. What is more, the
university
 developed new sports facilities, including table tennis tables, a new gym, and squash courts. They
also
 built two new cafes. So,
it is clear that
 the
university
 changed and expanded during
this
 period.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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