Travellers and business people often come into contact with other cultures briefly. What are the main advantages and disadvantages of doing so?

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were

at the time when international relations are most. People make contact with other cultures, both during travel and as a part of their work. One of the most important advantages of

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is that it enhances international understanding of people.

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, the communication with local people is a good

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a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances

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choice

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to explore some similarities in their culture.

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issue will resolve some

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of or relating to the arts and manners that a group favors

cultural

differences among nations that have been

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a main reason

the main reason

of distances for many years. There are

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some advantages for business people.

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During

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short visit, if business people can understand

culture

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the culture

of that country, they will be more

successfull

having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome

successful

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with

the products they produce for that place. A good

illutration

artwork that helps make something clear or attractive

illustration

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McDonald’s

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a McDonald’s

that has many branches all over the world

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They produce different products according to each country’s traditional

foods

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food

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is one of the reasons they are

prefered

more desirable than another

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proffered

prepared

by people.

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, the main

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the quality of being a hindrance

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drawback

is that

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experience with other cultures might be superficial and it gives to people some mistaken ideas

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, they can

engage in

make

generalizations about what they have experienced that are not true. Unlike

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to get the right ideas about other cultures requires long time experiences and good communications with local people. To conclude, relations with other countries have some benefits about our personal improvement and for working

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developers

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we should have conscious to

having

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have

the right

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the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning

knowledge

about another culture is not based on one or two limited

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contacts

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Long-term experiences

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absolutely essential

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be built

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having knowledge of

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.5

Complete response

4.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

265 words

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Travellers and business people often come into contact with other cultures briefly. What are the main advantages and disadvantages of doing so?

Fully explain your ideas

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