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There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

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The charts demonstrate the outcomes of a survey conducted to know some information about the
education
 of people in their adulthood. The bar
chart
 gives us the reasons behind choosing to study among
adults whereas
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adults, whereas
 the pie
chart
 illustrates the opinion of the public about the division of the costs between 3 different entities
(
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(
employer, individual, and taxpayer). Overall, the greatest reason for deciding to have an
education
 among adults is the interest in
subject whereas
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subject, whereas
 the smallest is to meet people. And the shared common view of people concerning how much every entity should contribute to the costs of
education
 is that an individual, employer and taxpayer should pay 40%, 35% and 25% respectively of the total cost. Regarding the pie
chart
, being able to change jobs and meeting people are the weakest motives to study because they make up 12 % and 9% respectively of the total reasons. And the two major reasons are
interest
Suggestion
interested
 in the subject and gaining qualifications since they are 40% and 38 % respectively of the people being involved in the survey.
Also
, there are two other reasons which are improving
prospects
Suggestion
the prospects
 of promotion and enjoying study equally constitute 20% of the total reasons. Another slightly similar percentage, which is 22%, is to help them during their current job. Concerning the pie
chart
, the view of the public on dividing the costs of the
education
 can be demonstrated
as
Suggestion
at
 the following; the individual should contribute most to the
education
 cost and
that is
 to say 40%, the employer should pay 35% of the gross value, and
finally
, the taxpayer should take the ¬responsibility of the rest which is 25%.¬¬

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emotional release
  • cultural significance
  • globalization
  • cultural exchange
  • technology
  • preservation
  • cultural heritage
  • social cohesion
  • expression
  • consumption
  • production
  • traditional music
  • international music
  • diversity
  • identity
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