The graph below shows the amount of waste produced by three companies over the period of 15 years

The graph below shows the amount of waste produced by three companies over the period of 15 years
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information about the number of
waste
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produced by three different companies during the 15 years.
Overall
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company
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A and B had sharply
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from 2000 to 2015,
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however
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company
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C had significantly
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in these years.
It is clear that
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, the amount of
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in
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company
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an enormous decline from the pick point which
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12
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tonne
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over the period.
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,
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second
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B
company
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had been shown a substantial climb between 2000 and 2005, but
next
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decade the level of
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this
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company
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dramatically
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dropped
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weak point. As regards the C
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,
a
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dramatic quality of
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steeply increased from 4 to 10 tonnes,
however
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despite greater protection of
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,
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company
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was not as popular as others.
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, another interesting point is that
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C
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's trend had been crossed with B in 2010 and A in 2012
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, company with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatically" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • waste production
  • company
  • trends
  • significant
  • fluctuations
  • surges
  • reductions
  • correlations
  • environmental policies
  • technological advancements
  • units of measurement
  • time period
  • stability
  • milestones
  • graph analysis
  • pattern recognition
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