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Students at school and university have to take too many tests and exams. These tests make it harder to teach and harder to learn and put students under unnecessary pressure. Is this a fair comment?

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In recent years educational institutions have started taking more exams to gauge their pupil's knowledge.
However
, it is believed that
such
 trends have led to difficulties in imparting lessons for the teachers and retaining power of the students,
finally
 causing mental and
pshycological
mental or emotional as opposed to physical in nature
psychological
 negative impact on the children. In my opinion, it is fair to say that
such
 a pressure is causing invariable issues and something should be done to have a balance in teaching and taking exams.
Moreover
, the children are put in
such
 a position that they do not get to enjoy outdoor activities or play.
This
however
 would make them dull and curbs their imagination.
Additionally
, the university going students
have
Suggestion
has
 to work hard to achieve good grades since their future job depends on how well they have scored in their graduation.
Therefore
, they miss out on many practical lessons of life, like taking up extra curricular activities or internships. For that matter, nowadays, schools have unit tests, Weekly tests, half year tests and many more
such
 tests and
finally
 they would reach their annual test. Education has become more burdensome for the current generation as the system does not understand what the children need to learn. It would be seen as a welcome change as the Ministers of education put more efforts in changing
such
 archaic system. Ideally, there should be two tests in every session with practical and fun ways to teach them.
Firstly
,
this
 would help teachers get
attention
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the attention
 of their pupils.
Secondly
, colleges should provide real world experience to graduates and help them with adjusting in
new work environment
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the new work environment
a new work environment
. In Conclusion, I think it is fair to suggest that educational institutes should curb the exam system and make changes.
This
 would be more helpful for the students in
long run
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the long run
 and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 hope they realize that our new generation of youngsters
deserve
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deserves
 better not burden.

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