Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In
this
modern era, the media became
third eye
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the third eye
of the world. They take many coverages of different type
ofcelebrities
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of celebrities
which are telecasted on
thier
of them or themselves
their
media channels. Some are good as well as bad. Some people believed that it puts a negative effect on the children. Now
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refers to the speaker or writer
I
will enunciate effect of media in the upcoming paragraphs. I accord with the statement
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.
There are ample reasons of behind
this
problem.
First
of all, celebrities are legend or ideal for the youngsters and children. But, sometime they have done wrong things with other which proved bad for
thier
of them or themselves
their
future.
Moreover
, they speak vulgar language on the shows
of
from a particular thing or place or position
off
media
channel
.
For instance
,
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,
many actors as well as actresses speak the wrong
languagelanguage
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language language
with other celebrities those are telecasted on the various media
channel
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channels
. Apart from that, the media cannot stop telecast these shows because they want higher
trp
a journey for some purpose (usually including the return)
trip
.
In addition
to
this
, children and youngsters adopted these things in
thier
of them or themselves
their
there
daily routine life. They start using vulgar language
.
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.
Which destroys the level of
language of
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language, of
the nation.
On the contrary
,
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,
these coverages proved a threat for tv celebrities. Because, a lot of media
channel
takes eye on the activities.
Furthermore
, the privacy of famous people is vanished.
Besides
that, the media cannot stop their coverage of media channels. In the sum up, in my point of view, celebrities should give
thier
of them or themselves
their
speech very
seriously
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serious
. These speeches became a lifeline for
thier
of them or themselves
their
theatre
there
fans. Media should telecast good news on
this
channel
which proved beneficial for the nation and children.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Celebrity culture
  • Glamorization
  • Unrealistic expectations
  • Self-esteem
  • Scandals
  • Role models
  • Moral development
  • Mental health
  • Influence
  • Exposure
  • Social media platforms
  • Charity work
  • Inappropriate behavior
  • Perfection image
  • Negative impact
  • Inspire children
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