The table below shows the worldwide market share of the notebook computer market for manufacturers in the years 2006 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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of notebook computer manufacturers in two separate years.

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HP

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was the most commonly - used

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Fujitsu - Siemens’s consumption is the lowest from 2006 to 2007.

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, Dell and Toshiba witnessed an increase in their proportions

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other producers fell in 2007. In 2006,

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accounted for the largest slice of the

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, at 13,4%, compared to the figures for its competitors, namely Dell and Toshiba, at 16,6% and 6,2% respectively. A year later, there was a rise of approximately 3% to 34% in the

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of

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growth in the percentage of the two closest competitors was

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seen from 2006 to 2007, with the figure for Dell climbing to 20,2% and that for Toshiba rising to 7,3%.

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, other computer manufacturers saw a significant decline

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2 years. In 2006, the

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companies occupied 22,8%, compared to about 11,6%

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Acer and 6,6%

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Lenovo. By 2007, the percentage of Acer and Lenovo was 10,7% and 6,2%, a fall of 9% and 0,4% since the previous year.

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, we can see that Fujitsu - Siemens’s, the lowest proportion in both two years, rose from 4,8% to 2,3% in over a year.