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Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which three you consider the most effective. Comic Books Radio Television Film Theater Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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Our
daily life, we communicate
information
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 through lots of different media like the internet, televisions, radios, books, cell phones, films etc. We are living in
such
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 a time when
information
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 is one of the most important issues and the
information
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 technologies as well as the communication media greatly influence our lives. The rapid-growing websites and TV channels are many of few little examples how m
edia
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the media
are spreading to make
information
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 easily accessible. All the media for
information
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 interchange have advantages and disadvantages and not all can attract all types of audiences. Comics, books, radios, televisions,
film
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 and theatre are all very powerful media for communicating
information
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. In my opinion books, televisions and
film
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 among those aforementioned six media are most effective. Books are the witness of history and the main source from which we gain knowledge. From a very ancient period till now, books have been working as the light-house for our society. In our childhood, we gather most of our knowledge and skills from books. It opens new horizons in front of us. The writer writes down their experiences, imaginations, knowledge, explanation etc. a
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About
each and every issue of our lives. Books are the long-lasting protocol to make a bridge a
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between
writers and readers.
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, all a
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is not
happy to read books. They expect something easier and more vivid. Music, radios, films etc. a
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Are
more appealing to them. Television is another powerful media. Watching television is a part of our daily l
ives.
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life
 Most of the people who have a TV set, watch programs, news etc. w
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With
apt attention. It is a strong medium for G
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the Government
and other organisations to send their messages to the mass population. Program representatives
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 broadcast the people's view and opinions about different controversial issues in TV programs.
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,
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 medium has lots of demerits and bad impacts. Government and politically biased organisations often send negative and misleading news. Again young people watch different satellite channels and try to adopt the alien culture which is really harmful for the culture and tradition of a country. Films are an audio-visual representation and can catch the attention of people from different geographical locations, races and cultures. A good
film
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 can shape someone's morality and doctrine and the
f
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ilm-makers
a producer of motion pictures
filmmakers
with their huge amount of money, are so careful to make their films realistic and eye-absorbing. Every
film
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 has a direct or potential message or moral.
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, some films
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also brings
a wrong message to us.
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the protagonists
are always smoking in the films and it seems that smoking is a good and smart habit. It causes many younger people imitate them smoking. In conclusion, I would like to state that b
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the books
 televisions and films are the most powerful and effective m
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a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information
media
for communicating
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.

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