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Some people think that government funding should not be used for supporting art and culture, while others think that supporting cultural activities may be beneficial for the population and the culture. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Every person has their own perspective views of if the government should invest in supporting
art
 and
culture
 or no. But, some people do believe that it is a waste of money and there are other concerns that are more important. On the one hand, there are a variety of issues which need funding from government.The
first
 concern is the education system. To be more specific education plays a major role it helps in developing the country. Educated and well-informed citizens can make a great work force, which will develop the nation's economy. Another issue that needs investing is the environment.In many areas, the pollution is relatively serious as there are many cars in used and huge amount of waste from the factories is discharged into the environment.
As a result
, government funding should be used to address
this
 problem.
On the other hand
, I believe that investing in
art
 and
culture
 bring many different benefits for population and society.
For example
, music and movies are able to help peoples relax and refresh their minds after a long day working hard. In additions, all the beliefs and
culture
, tradition which is being passed down to us from generation to generation it should be supportive and valued.
Therefore
, it is necessary for the authority to allocate the resources in supportive
art
 and
culture
. In conclusion, while
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 agree that national budget should be used for developing the education and tackling the environmental issues, I firmly believe that investment in
art
 and
culture
 should not be overlooked because of its merits for peoples and community.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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