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The process shows how waste glass bottles are recycled.

#process #waste #glass #bottles
The presented diagram illustrates the manufacturing process the recycling of
glass
 bottles after customers used. Overall, it can be seen that
this
 production consists of three stages, starting from customers using bottles to sell
new
Suggestion
new glass bottles
a new glass bottle
glass
 bottle in supermarkets for customers to buy it.
First
 of all, after customers used bottles, they throw always to collect points and
then
 garbage truck will collect the bottles to clean plant.
Next
, after bottles are clean with high-pressure water, they are
sort
Suggestion
sorted
, including green, brown and clear types in
glass factory
Suggestion
a glass factory
the glass factory
.
Thus
, before being melted in furnace,
glass
 bottles are broken as pieces.
Therefore
, before being filled in the block of the shape of
glass
 bottles, they are mixed with melted old liquid
glass
 and new liquid
glass
.
Finally
, in the
last
 stage before
glass
 bottles are
delivery
Suggestion
delivered
 in different places and sold in supermarkets, they are distributed in packaging.

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