Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In todays era, Visiting different
country
and places has become
comman
belonging to or participated in by a community as a whole; public
common
practice. People love to see different parts of
world
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the world
.
However
, as per few sources
this
practice
has
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has also led
also
lead to the development of the problem among the traveller and the local. I Shall be discussing more on
this
topic in the following paragraph.
To begin
with, When
human wish
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the human wish
to explore
an
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a
part of the world, before going there he
does
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has done
all the research
of
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on
particular location
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a particular location
. He does not just land
to
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in
a new
places
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place
without having any
knowledage
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
or knowing the local practice of the place. Exploring new
country
or cities have
tremandous
extraordinarily large in size or extent or amount or power or degree
tremendous
benifits
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
.
for
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For
instance, Mankind can adapt their good
habbits
an established custom
habits
hobbits
habitats
and their working
cultural
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culture
. Which they can come back to their
orignal
preceding all others in time or being as first made or performed
original
location and use adapted cultural to uplift their
standered
a basis for comparison; a reference point against which other things can be evaluated
standard
standards
of living. And it
also
attracts the exchange of the currency. Due to the money exchange,
their
in or at that place
there
is
growth
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the growth
of the entire nation. Attracting advance technology is
also
the positive side of the same.
Moreover
,
their
in or at that place
there
are
few drawback
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a few drawbacks
few drawbacks
of the same, if people visit to certain places and they do not follow the rules and regulation of the
country
it can lead to
bigger issue
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bigger issues
the bigger issue
a bigger issue
. Like they can even go
in
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to
jail or
loose
fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
lose
ther
of them or themselves
their
lives.Some
country
are
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is
very particular about their laid obligations. And if the tourist are not aware of the local
language
Accept comma addition
language, then
then
too they can land up in
problem
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the problem
a problem
of getting robbed or getting
bullying
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bullied
by locals.
This
can create a major problem in international
tourisim
the business of providing services to tourists
tourism
terrorism
. To conclude, I
personaly
as yourself
personally
disagree with the mention statement.
but
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But
it is
also
recommendated
push for something
recommended
to have
entire knowhow
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the entire knowhow
about the location before
visting
the activity of making visits
visiting
.
This
will be
helpfull
providing assistance or serving a useful function
helpful
for everyone and human won't be in trouble.

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