Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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In todays era, Visiting different

country

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and places has become

comman

belonging to or participated in by a community as a whole; public

common

practice. People love to see different parts of

world

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the world

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, as per few sources

this

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practice

has

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has also led

also

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lead to the development of the problem among the traveller and the local. I Shall be discussing more on

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topic in the following paragraph.

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with, When

human wish

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the human wish

to explore

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part of the world, before going there he

does

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has done

all the research

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particular location

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a particular location

. He does not just land

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a new

places

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place

without having any

knowledage

the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning

knowledge

or knowing the local practice of the place. Exploring new

country

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or cities have

tremandous

extraordinarily large in size or extent or amount or power or degree

tremendous

benifits

financial assistance in time of need

benefits

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for

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For

instance, Mankind can adapt their good

habbits

an established custom

habits

hobbits

habitats

and their working

cultural

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culture

. Which they can come back to their

orignal

preceding all others in time or being as first made or performed

original

location and use adapted cultural to uplift their

standered

a basis for comparison; a reference point against which other things can be evaluated

standard

standards

of living. And it

also

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attracts the exchange of the currency. Due to the money exchange,

their

in or at that place

there

growth

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the growth

of the entire nation. Attracting advance technology is

also

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the positive side of the same.

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their

in or at that place

there

are

few drawback

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a few drawbacks

few drawbacks

of the same, if people visit to certain places and they do not follow the rules and regulation of the

country

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it can lead to

bigger issue

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bigger issues

the bigger issue

a bigger issue

. Like they can even go

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jail or

loose

fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense

lose

ther

of them or themselves

their

lives.Some

country

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are

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very particular about their laid obligations. And if the tourist are not aware of the local

language

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language, then

then

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too they can land up in

problem

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the problem

a problem

of getting robbed or getting

bullying

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bullied

by locals.

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can create a major problem in international

tourisim

the business of providing services to tourists

tourism

terrorism

. To conclude, I

personaly

as yourself

personally

disagree with the mention statement.

but

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But

it is

also

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recommendated

push for something

recommended

to have

entire knowhow

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the entire knowhow

about the location before

visting

the activity of making visits

visiting

This

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will be

helpfull

providing assistance or serving a useful function

helpful

for everyone and human won't be in trouble.

Wed Mar 25 2020

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Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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