You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, • describe the situation • explain your problems and why it is difficult to work • say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

Dear Sir/

Madame

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, I am writing to you, for requesting

change

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of my accommodation. Currently, I live in

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room

G-36 which is shared by another girl student. I am finding it extremely difficult to study in the

room

. It is because

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I have been used to work or study in isolated environments from my childhood. I am more productive when I am working alone. On top of it, the student

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I share the

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is loud and always gets her friends to the place.

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, the student hangs her clothes around generating a damp smell and, disturbing the serenity. I request you to change my accommodation to a non-shareable

room

. It would greatly help me to study and excel in my academics. I hope you accept my request. Looking forward to

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from you. Yours faithfully, Sashank Alladi