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Many sports players advertise sports-related products. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

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Nowadays,
sport
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the sport
 has a huge impact
in
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on
 our lives and advertising is a crucial part of every
sport
 activities. Many prominent
sport
 personalities advertise different kind of
sport
 related or other products for
money
. In
this
 essay, we will throw some light on the advantages and disadvantages of
this
 trend. On the one hand, some people severely supposed that, advantages of
this
 trend surpassing negative sights.
Firstly
, players can promote certain products in a better way because they use
this
 kind of things in their line of work.
For example
, a well-known Dutch energy company Gatorade bought sponsorship of UEFA for 5$ million and a huge increase seem that in their
sale
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sales
 numbers and the ingredients in the drink keep players vigilant throughout the game. Except
this
,
this
 kind of advertises could increase the
sport players
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sport, players
 fame and may be a fringe benefit for them. Who says no to more
money
?
On the other hand
, in some cases negative sights could
oughweigh
be heavier than
outweigh
 the advantages and dream of the sportsmen
could be turn
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could turn
 into nightmare.
First major reason
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The first major reason
 could be deficiency of quality in brands which sportsmen be an advertisement face of
this
 company and
this
 phenomenon will lead to the reduction of reputation. The
second
 vital problem will be lack of concentration on their daily life which happened due to the he was featured in myriads of advertisements at that time. The result of
this
 could be devastating for the players and ruin their game play and it may turn them to the
money
 minded In conclusion,
it
it is
it's
 obvious that in our
society it
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society, it
 is
impossible live without
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impossible to live without
money
 and
therefore
 I think that, attendance of them in advertises is normal. But the major part
is do not let
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hasn't let
has not let
does not let
doesn't let
is not letting
 vanity destroy your career.

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