Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be shut down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.

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, animals are not treated properly in the

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are difficult to entertain just because they take money cut of them.

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something that is lost

loss

f their lifespan. The

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is the solution proposed by some above reasons.

On the other hand

, the

zoo

is meant to protect the wildlife species to save the future generations of those animals.

Initially

, some countries’ zoos are unprofitable to do a wildlife rescue plan by sending a significant gr

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group

cross the forest to look for endangered species and take them to the

zoo

to provide the appropriate nourishment. If the

zoo

closed, the animals in the red list would be death.

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