Some people say that television is useful for education, while others say it is useful only for entertainment. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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It is a common belief watching
televison
broadcasting visual images of stationary or moving objects
television
to educate is
benefical
promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
,
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however another
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however, another
belief
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believes
it is just for fun. I will briefly discuss two viewpoints supporting by its overweight advantages for learning. In the modern life, many people usually spend their leisure
time
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to watch
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watching
television
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programmes. Admittedly, there are plenty shows on it,
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as documentary, cartoon, series, kind of films. You can find whatever you want to choose.
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From
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point of view, parents can alter to learn their child documentaries or even special classes on there. If a couple is consciously about teaching, they can utilize accurately
child's intelligence
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the child's intelligence
.
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, ın Turkey, after
coronavirus
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outbreak school lessons are live on the screens. All kids have continued to them by
television
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. Every day like
as
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at
school, all students have settled on the screens. Not only teaching methods,
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they keep healthy pupil's
physciology
the branch of the biological sciences dealing with the functioning of organisms
physiology
. In my opinion, all
screenager
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strangers
stranger
stronger
have still happy and healthy connection with it, it is clear that
television
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has a vital role in crisis
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.
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,
million kind
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a million kinds
million kinds
of crime or other bad-tempered examples or
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entertainment programmes are watched, and they
can not inhibited
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can not inhibit
. Due to, sometimes it is so far from knowledge, just for wasting
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.
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, it has more option,
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mostly personal.
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, some cartoons which made for fun
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can teach
to kids how to
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kids how to
be well-
behaviored
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. To evident, kids like to catch information with cartoons.
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to say, without any inappropriate contents mostly shows have
benefical
promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
for individuals. In conclusion, I restate that if we are
consciously
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conscious
about show's contents it is useful
to
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for
in
increasing intelligence of people's. Meanwhile, pupils who are
lock
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locked
on screens, can connect with
to
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in
social life, particularly crisis
time
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. I consider lack of inappropriate shows mostly
television
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adds to us information about any advance topics.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • educational programs
  • informative documentaries
  • interactive learning
  • entertaining content
  • reality shows
  • cartoons
  • intellectual development
  • parental guidance
  • screen time
  • creative thinking
  • educational potential
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