The pie charts show the main reason for migration to and from the UK in 2007. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The first pie chart illustrates the main
reasons
why Use synonyms
people
immigrated to the UK in 2007, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
second
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one
shows the same information on Use synonyms
emigration
.
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Overall
, there Linking Words
are
quite a wide range of Change the verb form
is
reasons
for Use synonyms
migration
, Use synonyms
whereas
the differences Linking Words
among
their Change preposition
in
popularity
are not so noticeable. Use synonyms
Moreover
, some Linking Words
people
did not state any Use synonyms
reason
for their Use synonyms
migration
(6% and 18% for Use synonyms
immigration
and Use synonyms
emigration
respectively), at the same time, some grope of Use synonyms
people
claimed Use synonyms
than
none of the given Correct word choice
that
reasons
are suitable for them (11% of Use synonyms
immigrants
and 14% of Use synonyms
emigrants
).
Now turning to the details, Use synonyms
reasons
Use synonyms
as
“definite job” and “accompany/join” Correct quantifier usage
such as
are
have nearly the same Unnecessary verb
apply
popularity
both for Use synonyms
immigration
and Use synonyms
emigration
. The first Use synonyms
one
is the most widespread Use synonyms
reason
for Use synonyms
migration
with 30% and 29% of the respondents stating it as their Use synonyms
reasons
for Use synonyms
immigration
and Use synonyms
emigration
respectively. The Use synonyms
second
mentioned Linking Words
reason
is a bit less popular with the results of 15% and 13% in the Use synonyms
researches
on Fix the agreement mistake
research
immigration
and Use synonyms
emigration
respectively.
The Use synonyms
reasons
Use synonyms
as
“education” and “looking for Change preposition
apply
job
” have quite different Add an article
a job
popularity
among Use synonyms
immigrants
and Use synonyms
emigrants
. The first Use synonyms
one
was claimed as a Use synonyms
reason
for Use synonyms
migration
by 22% of Use synonyms
emigrants
and only by 12% of Use synonyms
immigrants
, Use synonyms
while
the Linking Words
second
Linking Words
one
, having an immense difference in Use synonyms
popularity
among Use synonyms
people
who came to Use synonyms
country
and left it, was claimed as a Add an article
the country
reason
for Use synonyms
migration
by 26 % of Use synonyms
immigrants
and only by 4% of Use synonyms
emigrants
.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "second, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words reasons, people, one, emigration, migration, popularity, reason, immigration, immigrants, emigrants with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "differences" was used 2 times.
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