It is sometimes said that a high salary is the most important factor in choosing a job. Do you agree?
It is certainly true that payment is a necessary thing to consider in preferring a line of
work
, but it is not the most important one. This
argument will be proven that a harmonious workplace and love of work
are the leading factors in choosing a job
.
For one, working with people in our job
area harmoniously is more significantly weighed in job
preference than what a person may earn. For example
, I am currently working as an ICU (Intensive Care Unit) nurse in a tertiary level and a private hospital called the Urdaneta Sacred Heart Hospital here in the Philippines, and I have chosen to work
in this
unit because I have too many companions in the hospital. My workmate
, friendship and support for my career growth are things that I considered more important than my earnings every month. So I believe that working in a harmonious environment is more about taking into considerations.
In addition
to this
, loving what we do is as important as working in an
habitat Suggestion
a
harmoniously
when choosing an occupation. Suggestion
harmonious
For instance
, I have a strong compassion for other people, especially for the elderly as well as I love touching their lives make a difference, which is nursing is all about. Thus
, I preferred to become an ICU nurse. I am also
certain that all of the professionals chose their line of occupation because they are happy with what they are actually doing.
In conclusion, harmoniously interacting with our co-workers in our work
habitat and being satisfied with what we are doing are the most important considerations in selecting a job
. It is not the salary. So choose an occupation with a supportive environment and that you are happy to do with.Submitted by basha.aldior2 on
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