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It is sometimes said that a high salary is the most important factor in choosing a job. Do you agree?

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It is certainly true that payment is a necessary thing to consider in preferring a line of
work
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, but it is not the most important one.
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 argument will be proven that a harmonious workplace and love of
work
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 are the leading factors in choosing a
job
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. For one, working with people in our
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 area harmoniously is more significantly weighed in
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 preference than what a person may earn.
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, I am currently working as an ICU (Intensive Care Unit) nurse in a tertiary level and a private hospital called the Urdaneta Sacred Heart Hospital here in the Philippines, and I have chosen to
work
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 in
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 unit because I have too many companions in the hospital. My
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, friendship and support for my career growth are things that I considered more important than my earnings every month. So I believe that working in a harmonious environment is more about taking into considerations.
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 to
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, loving what we do is as important as working in
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a
 habitat
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harmonious
 when choosing an occupation.
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, I have a strong compassion for other people, especially for the elderly as well as I love touching their lives make a difference, which is nursing is all about.
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, I preferred to become an ICU nurse. I am
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 certain that all of the professionals chose their line of occupation because they are happy with what they are actually doing. In conclusion, harmoniously interacting with our co-workers in our
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 habitat and being satisfied with what we are doing are the most important considerations in selecting a
job
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. It is not the salary. So choose an occupation with a supportive environment and that you are happy to do with.

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