In your apartment building there is an entrance hall which you share with your neighbours. Recently there have been some problems with this shared area. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter introduce yourself and describe the problem or problems suggest what could be done to improve the situation suggest a meeting to talk about it

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Dear Neighbours, Hello, I am Shahd, your neighbour. I moved to
this
building recently. And my family really found
this
area very welcoming and lovely. But the problem, it is really disturbing the sound of high music that comes from your apartment. I love your music taste, but my kids cannot sleep from it and they found it annoying. For that, I want to ask you to lower the music, voice during the
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week days
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.
However
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my children want to do their
homeworks
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homework
and study for their exams.
Also
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there are some nice coffee shops down the street
who
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play nice songs based on the customer order for a little tip.
Moreover
, I do not want to sound rude with
this
message. I would love to meet you face to face and have a talk about my text to you. Tell me when it's a good time for you to meet. I look forward
for
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your replay best regards Shahd
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