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The chart below shows the GDP growth per year for three countries between 2007 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at leat 150 words.

The chart below shows the GDP growth per year for three countries between 2007 and 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at leat 150 words.
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The bar chart gives
an information
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information
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 about the data on the annual
GDP
 growth of three different countries,
Tunisia
,
Japan
 and Ecuador from
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the year
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year
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years
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 2007 and 2010.
Overall
, the annual
GDP
 success of
Tunisia
 declined per period
while
,
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Japan
 inclined continually and Ecuador in fluctuation. In 2007, the annual
GDP
 rate estimate of
Tunisia
 was 6.3%, which was the highest percentage of the
three period
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three-period
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 groups.In 2010 the
GDP
 success of
Tunisia
was
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declined manner and the amount was 3% which is the lowest
percentages
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percentage
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.
The
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apply
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Japan
's
GDP
 improvement was
contrasting
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contrasted
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 to that of
Tunisia
 it was inclined manner slightly per term. In 2007 the annual
GDP
 rise standard of
Japan
 was 2%, which was the lowest percentage of the
three period
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three-period
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 groups. Until 2010, the
GDP
 advance of
Japan
 inclined at 6.5% and
that
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which
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 was the highest One. In 2007 and 2010, the annual
GDP
 growth estimate of Ecuador was 3.2% and 1.5%, which was the lowest percentage of the year.
In
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2008 and 2009
was
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were
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 inclined
of
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to
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GDP
 growth of the year.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words gdp, tunisia, japan with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • GDP growth rate
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • fluctuations
  • peaks and troughs
  • economic performance
  • comparative analysis
  • stability
  • volatility
  • economic crisis
  • policy changes
  • annual growth
  • main features
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