Some people say that instead of seeing the Internet as a way of opening up new communication possibilities world-wide, we should be concerned about the effect this is having on social interaction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

There was a quote that
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says
"
Internet
can pull the far ones, but
also
distance the near ones". Some people think that
internet
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the internet
is helpful to the worldwide communication. In the other hand, some people
does not agree
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do not agree
and said that
internet
ruining social interaction. I agree with both of the arguments. These are some explanations to both views. Long
time
ago people only can communicate by mail. It
take
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takes
several days to send or receive a mail and postcards. Using
internet people
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the internet people
can communicate without concerning
time
and places. In seconds, even real
time
, people can communicate with others from different countries.
For instance
, we can see most of overseas student these days calling their parents in their home country. Whenever we feel lonely we can call anybody, anywhere, and anytime. It is possible because of
internet
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the internet
.
In contrast
, people feel that
internet
distracting the social interaction.
Internet
function
sometimes make
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sometimes makes
people not mindful
at
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of
the present
time
. People with
internet
addiction tend to place their eyes on the gadget screen. They
does not care
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do not care
are not caring
have not cared
anymore to people around them and focused
to
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on
the
internet
content. It is not odd anymore to see people focusing on gadget at family dinning. People can forget about
time
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the time
and places when they focus on their gadget. In summary,
internet
bring
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brings
many facilities and easiness to people life.
However
, everything
that is
too much can have a negative impact. Too much seeing
internet
can make us forget about our
live
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lives
and people surround us.
There for
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Therefor
we need to
used
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use
internet
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the internet
, but in a balance way.

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