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in some areas of the us a curfew is imposed, in which teenages are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless hey are accompanied by an adult. what is your opinion about this?

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In certain parts of US, teenagers are not allowed to go out after a particular hour of
night
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 without an adult. In my point of view, adolescents are too young to handle
them selves
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themselves
 safe and secure alone at all times.
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Firstly it
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Firstly, it
 is clear that, keeping
teenagers home
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the teenagers home
 during late hours at
night
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 is beneficial for them, because if they go out, they are more likely to contact with strangers who can be criminals or drug addicts. Since the 'drug mafia' is so common these days, it is better to take precautions to not to fall into that trap which will result in lifetime regret. Apart from that, sexual predators
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 target teenagers who are alone at
night
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. Most of the time young minds can not distinguish between the good and bad relationships and they might fall into traps with these kinds of people with them even knowing. Incidents like these will not happen if they spend the
night
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 hours at home with their parents.
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, if teenagers are accompanied by an adult they have less chance
in
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of
 falling
in to
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into
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 traps.
This
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 will protect
themselves
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them
 from danger as well as the parents.
Also
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, Parents can use
this
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 time to build a special bond with their children without being over controlled. In conclusion, I firmly support the idea of curfew or being accompanied by an adult at
night
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 as a better initiative to protect the teenagers who are the future of the world.

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