The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030.

The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030.
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The line graph compares figures for daily travel by workers in the UK using three different forms of transport over a period of 60 years.
It is clear that
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the
car
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is by far the most popular means of transport for UK commuters throughout the period shown.
Also
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,
while
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the
numbers
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number
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of people who use
the
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apply
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car
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and train increase gradually, the
number
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of bus
users
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falls steadily. In 1970, around 5
million
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UK commuters travelled by
car
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on a daily basis,
while
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the bus and train were used by about 4
million
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and 2
million
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people respectively. In the year 2000, the
number
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of those driving to work rose to 7
million
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and the
number
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of commuting rail passengers reached 3
million
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.
However
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, there was a small drop of approximately 0.5
million
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in the
number
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of bus
users
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. By 2030, the
number
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of people who commute by
car
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is expected to reach almost 9
million
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, and the
number
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of train
users
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is
also
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predicted to rise, to nearly 5
million
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.
By contrast
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, buses are predicted to become a less popular choice, with only 3
million
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daily
users
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words car, number, users, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "numbers of" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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