In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent. Why do you think this is and what can be done about it?

One of the most important aspect which the world needs to focus on today is dramatically advancing violent crime rate. There are innumerable reasons for

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, among which the major cause is forever increasing unemployment and human greed. There are many steps which are needed to be taken both by the government as well as by individuals of the

society

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with, as the human population is enormously growing so is the rate of unemployment.

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forces individuals to be more inclined towards robbery, kidnapping and illegal

work

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in order to earn money.

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, most of these unlawful tasks

are taken

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have taken

upon by youngsters of the community who fail to achieve a decent position in the

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force. Apart from

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, as the globe is getting more and more commercialized, luxury is what everybody desires, leading to increase in greed among the human population. Along with

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,

internet

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the internet

has made every individual an easy target to the dark world as well as porn, which in turn makes them live in a fantasy world continuously. Very recently, in one of the city of Hyderabad, a young doctor was brutally gang raped in a barbaric way and

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burned alive.

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is a very sad example of today’s increase in violent crimes. In order to find

solution

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a solution

the solution

to

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growing problem, not only the

government but

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government, but

individuals should take multiple initiatives. To overcome unemployment, communities

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need

to be educated. Along with

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, the youth needs to be made aware about their own talent

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that these talented and educated individuals can be made part of the

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force that can lead to

betterment

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the betterment

of the

society

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. As a member of the

society

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, we humans need to raise awareness among each other. More and more importance should be given to mental health and community service rather luxurious things.

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The world

is a global village,

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hence forth

from this time forth; from now on

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, not only the government

authorities but

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authorities, but

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the people should

work

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towards increasing the opportunities of employment and change the mindset of our

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. Every individual

needs develop

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needs, develop

empathy towards the other.