You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: say why he/she would not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her

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Dear Peter, I received your letter
last
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week, in which you asked me to help you choose the best choice between taking admission
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a college or searching for
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job
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. After considering the fact that your parents are sick,unable to work for
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last
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few months, and your financial condition is unstable. It is a critical time for you so, I would recommend you to rather start looking for a
job
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because ,if you plan to study
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you may struggle financially
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unable
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to keep up.
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, working can help your family surviving through
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situation and prevent you from coming
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debt.
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, by earning you wouldn't just only be able to buy the necessary medications for your parents, you would
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be able to accumulate money on the side for
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education. As you have all the necessary knowledge of Computers and the latest evolving trends in the field of Information and Technology.
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, you have
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plenty of options to explore and enhance your skills by working under various positions,
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example
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Cyber security analyst and System Administrator. I wish it clears your confusion and you soon start finding a
job
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, I know you understand
it
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very well that how important is earning for you at
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moment. I wish you
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good luck
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with your
job
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hunt and hope to hear
a good news
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good news
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soon. Regards, Shivdutt

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Real-world experience
  • Practical experience
  • Financial independence
  • On-the-job training
  • Student loan debt
  • Personal growth
  • Professional networking
  • Career development
  • Skilled workers
  • Job market
  • Career goals
  • Immediate income
  • Professional relationships
  • Market demand
  • Defining interests
  • Educational investments
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