In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people belive it is more important to protect countryside and not build new homes there. what is your opinion about this

Over the thousands of years after the establishment of human civilization the burden on mother earth has increased many folds due to ex
ponential increase i
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the exponential increase
an exponential increase
n the population. To fu
llfill t
put in effect
fulfil
he basic necessity like housing we are moving to the
countryside
as
that is
the only space left for disposal. A group of people ar
e o
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is
f be
lief t
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the belief
hat we should protect our
countryside
at all costs and not use it for building new homes. In
this
essay we are going to analyse
this
situation which is the most challenging pr
oblem especially f
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problem, especially
or over populated countries like India and China. In my opinion the
countryside
should be pr
octected a
kept safe or defended from danger or injury or loss
protected
s they ar
e only left p
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are only leaving
laces with gr
eenary.
green foliage
greenery
They act as a natural sink to all the harmful and pi
osionous
having the qualities or effects of a poison
poisonous
air
entering from the adjoining cities and filter it to provide us pure
air
. One can feel the difference in
air
quality within minutes of entering the pe
rephery o
the outside boundary or surface of something
periphery
f a co
untry side.
rural regions
countryside
According to a recent research by Na
tional Environmental Association,
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the National Environmental Association
in the absence of open areas near Delhi the
air
quality of our capital will de
teoriate b
become worse or disintegrate
deteriorate
y 50%. The
countryside
not only provide us fresh
air
, it is
also
home for many animals. The other species have equal right on earth as we do. The animals which live in gr
eat symphony w
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the great symphony
a great symphony
ith
countryside
life are not adapted to survive in overcrowded areas and face the hustle and bustle of cities. When we build homes in co
untry side we a
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country side, we
countryside we
re turning it into ci
ty a
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the city
a city
nd
consequently
forcing these animals out of their natural dwellings. Numerous studies have been conducted worldwide by animal enthusiasts and conservation societies to demonstrate how certain species of animals have faced extinction due to encroachment of people on their habitat.
For example
, the Cuckoo birds which could be heard in almost every tree in
co
untryside h
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the countryside
as greatly reduced in number due to disappearance of quiet and lush lands. As
su
ch it c
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such, it
an be concluded that there is no way to quench the ev
ergrowing t
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ever growing
hirst of mankind for be
tter life,
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a better life
but we have to think wisely and try to find ways to use spaces in cities op
timaly r
most desirable possible under a restriction expressed or implied
optimal
ather than going after already declining
countryside
.

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